Have you ever wondered what is feels to be in love? Terrible. Infact it is one of the craziest and most weird thing that you can ever experience. You simply let some weirdo who is no different than you to enter your stupid life expecting that in some way or the other things will turn for the better - it is like hoping that the stupid person would restore some sanity into your life. And then you are pleasantly surprised. Bed of roses- this is what love is not; a bunch of thorns-that it sure is.
But I reckon, we are all meant to be insane and what better way to make it more conspicuous than by falling in love with someone. Come to think of it, you surrender your heart, your soul and what not, just because that pimple faced girl smiled at you. You loose your focus. You loose your mind. Before you realise what went wrong, it is already too late. People start noticing you- you become so miserable. The sweet world has turned its back on you. Finally it dawns on you that the whole ordeal is not worth the pain you are going through. You decide to put an end to all this trash- easier said than done. It's soul hurt- a real gets inside you and rips you apart pain. I hate love
4 comments:
love....hmm cant really say wat u said is true in all respects sankash.
but u knw thorns even if there...rose has to look as beautiful as ever...
ppl will not stop buying roses for d sake of thorns in it coz love overrules it all!!
sankash..a suggestion...
i knw u hv written it wid some1 in mind...but just that 1 instance doesnt govern the aura of love always...
just love n love..it comes back to u in some or d other form...n believe me its totally harmless irrespective of thorns it may have. All it has in it is the redness of excitement,happiness,satisfaction, faith n commitment!!
then y not try it!!
so boy...dnt lose hope...love is beautiful in all respects!
Sunil Says
" being loved in return is something we all want. Why should you love something that cannot love you back?"
Wow!its great yar.I just want to say:
Dilka ka zakham zuban par laya nahi katre,
Apni aankho se ashq bahaya nahi katre,
Ghav kitne hi gehre kyu na ho,
Labo Se Muskurahat hataya nahi karte.
hmm..
gud Job Snkad Once again..
Analysis:
Comprehension : use of some low quality words made bitter than it was menat to be... also some beautifull aspects got lost which were Sarcastically described in II para.They should have gotten their place...
Flow : flow was awesome this time...just that bitterness in the jist could have been a bit sweet... ;-)
Rest guud guud job dear...
keep working...
GO FOR SOME SWEETER STUFF...
YOU GOT INSPIRATION NOW YAAR...
"US"
;)
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